1982, rev. 2003 |
"He let them all have it, and the ones behind them. Their bodies thumped like scarecrows. Blood and brains flew in streamers."
As part of the whole King's Highway project a few years back, I read through The Truth Inside the Lie's recommended Dark Tower reading order - the old one, that is, it's been revised since then. Had a blast. I hadn't read word one of the Dark Tower stories at that time, so I was discovering it as I went along. Since then, I've chewed over various aspects of the whole story and have been keeping a mental list of follow-up questions. The time has come to dive back in. To the 7 main books, at least - I may possibly reread a couple of peripherals likes Bag of Bones or Insomnia, and definitely a couple of the tie-in short stories like "Everything's Eventual" and "The Little Sisters of Eluria." And obviously The Wind Through the Keyhole. We'll see how it goes.
Note - there will be no or little recapping of the stories, so anyone who hasn't read the books might be a little lost. Sorry about that. Spoilers and not just for the book(s) in question but for Dark Tower altogether.
So! Here we are. I've just finished the revised edition of The Gunslinger that King put out in 2003. I gave this one a grade of "A" on my first read, and it came in at #24 in the most recently-compiled McRankings.
Here's an excerpt from a review someone else wrote as excerpted in my original review:
"The mystery of the book can also be overshadowing at times, rather than simply clouding perception the reader’s understanding is completely blocked for certain aspects of the narrative; which, at the closing point of The Gunslinger, can be overlooked, provided that they are explained later on in the series, otherwise this will be a serious flaw in this single book, let alone the series as a whole... I would not say this was an enjoyable read, but an intriguing and exciting one that has left me both frustrated and enthralled. The promise of the books that follow make the first book worth the reading as, when it boils down to it, the first book did nothing more than introduce the myths and imagery of the series, which themselves are a truly refreshing take on fantasy fiction."
I more or less still agree. It's one of those books where what is happening is clearly enough described, but motivation/ context is elusive. But is that a dealbreaker for a fantasy epic? You're supposed to want to keep reading to figure out what the heck is going on.
As for the "enjoyable" read part - is it enjoyable? I'd say it's more fascinating than enjoyable, but my brain is fighting me on that. Even though as I was rereading it I kept noting I wasn't so much enjoying it as enduring it. It's an opaque style of writing that can be a slog. And in a few spots, the mix of recognizable fantasy trope with 70s dystopian fatalism / mystic drugginess does not succeed. And sometimes it seems like King was just adding things (like Zoltan's outbursts, or Roland's suspicion that "what his father really wanted to do was fuck") to be jarring. In the scene where Roland suspects the latter, for example, I didn't get that vibe from Steven Deschain whatsoever.
Back to whether or not I find it an enjoyable read. When I make a list of each scene of the book that stands out to me - the opening palaver with Brown, the re-telling of the massacre of Tull and all that preceded it (including the rather bizarre gun-barrel-abortion), meeting Jake, taking mescaline and having one off with the ring-circle demon, magical jawbones, the journey by handcar under the mountains while attacked by that staple of all post-apocalyptic fiction, slow mutants - there isn't one I'd point to that as unenjoyable. Just describing them makes me want to pop open the book again. What stops me?
The answer is probably the style in which it's written. I'm about halfway through the next book in the series The Drawing of the Three as I write this. I'll save my thoughts on that one til I get there, but the difference in voice is striking. From the first it reads like King Especially if you begin the Drawing directly after finishing The Gunslinger, as I did.
But this is the very quality of The Gunslinger that appeals to me: it's like an actual glimpse through the Ur-Kindle into the King of a different timeline. What did this Stephen King go on to do? It has some great lines - the first sentence is always quoted, and it's a great first line of a book/ saga, for sure, but throughout, there are some real gems. I liked "the witch moaned, a witch with cancer in her belly" as well as another scene-setter from the early pages: "He did not take the flint and steel from his purse until the remains of the day were only fugitive heat in the ground beneath him and a sardonic orange line on the monochrome horizon."
That said, some of the writing is overdone. "As alien to this place and time as True Love, but as concrete as a Judgment" seems a little at odds with some of the other observations Roland makes, or later with the oracle "The gunslinger could gauge the need in Jake's body by the madness the sounds of the crickets bred in his own body. His arms seemed to seek out shale to scrape on, and his knees seemed to beg to be ripped in tiny, maddening, salty gashes."
One thing I didn't like is during the Palaver at the end the Man in Black bids Roland to tell him his tale. But when Roland begins to speak, the chapter (VII) fades out on an ellipsis and the next one picks up after his tale is done. What? This happens off-camera? It's a dodge and intentional frustration; I do not approve of such things. (Moreover, it is never revealed why the Crimson King whom the MIB serves wants them to palaver to begin with, or why he'd go through the trouble of setting it up, or why the MIB would do many of the other things he does leading up to it if the whole point was to set up a meeting. Not here in book 1, but I don't think anywhere else either.)
REVISION
A side-by-side comparison of all the stuff King put into The Gunslinger can be found here. It's a little remarkable to read. Is it just me or was like 80-90% of the recognizable Dark Tower content added in 2003. Is this a cheat? I don't think so, but there is a world of difference between mysterious scene-setting to be solved later and going back and, well, digitally inserting references. In King's intro, he writes:
"Once you know how things come out, you owe it to the potential reader - and to yourself - to go back and put things in order."
Do you? I don't know. Or is this some kind of wink-wink foreshadowing to how the series would eventually end?
At any rate, who can fault him for going back to streamline The Gunslinger into the other mythos. It's an understandable impulse and I think it stops short of the proverbial Greedo-firing-first line. Whether or not it improves the original stories I can't say, but it certainly makes them more Dark-Tower-y.
King also mentions in that intro that The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly was one of the inspirations for finally beginning his magnum opus. Two films he doesn't mention are Alejandro Jodorowsky's El Topo and Holy Mountain. I'm not the first to notice the strong thematic and tonal things The Gunslinger has in common with these movies, with their opaque approach, weird sexualities, existential palavers, quests to the tower/ mountain to reset a world that's moved on, relationship between boy and gunslinger, and scenes of shocking violence. Is this just a case of two plugged-in Baby Boomers who grew up reading and watching similar sci-fi and horror drawing from similar wells? Probably. Which is interesting, as it places King's Gunslinger in the same generational aspirational iconography as something like Easy Rider or Ellison's Dangerous Visions. Which is to say, when one wants to read the "soul" of that generation, The Gunslinger might not be the most obvious place to look, but perhaps it's equally revealing.
(And Jodorowsky himself even plays the lead in both films - foreshadowing of The Wordslinger's appearance in Book Six.)
I was intrigued to discover at that link that the creature the MIB serves (whom we know later is the Crimson King) was originally identified as "Merlin" in the original. (Or "Maerlyn," rather.) Given how Maerlyn later appears in the Big Story, it's interesting to see he was first teased as the identity of the Big Bad of the whole series.
One last question re: these revisions: the MIB mentions to Roland that before he gets to the Tower (and the king that lies before it) he must face the Ageless Stranger. Who is this? Does the MIB not refer to himself as that somewhere? (A quick google suggests this happens in The Waste Lands.) It better not be Dandelo. That would be ridiculous. Anyway, I'll be throwing out questions as they occur to me and watching to see when and where the Series answers them. That seems appropriate given the nature of the series - and especially of Book One, here.
QUESTION
What do people think of the subtitles of the different books? This one is "Resumption." Is that too on the nose?
(More questions but this one is more Drawing of the Three-specific, although it is mentioned specifically here: why exactly are the Doors there for Roland? Who built them? If we assume a benevolent entity/force helping Roland, is this just part of that, or are these things waiting there for anyone who can survive the lobstrosities? And why is the CK telling him about it instead of sending him in some other direction?)
AROUND THE WEB:
"It's not for everyone, but somehow it also is: as when looking at King's entire literary output, The Gunslinger is a hodge-podge of genres and styles, thrown together, that somehow works perfectly." - James Smythe, Rereading Stephen King.
"I love the direction Roland's tale eventually took, but I am enough of a masochist that part of me wishes King had never written any further than this first novel. (...) This was a novel of questions, not of answers; I wanted to know the answers, but in a way, I wanted to never know them. I love that sort of dark, majestic, unresolvable mystery, and as much as I also love King's later resolutions, I still yearn to be that young man devastated by the thought of Roland sitting on that beach, the Tower distant beyond all hope of approach. "- Bryant Burnette, Worst To Best: Stephen King Books (2018 Edition)
"This is a book loaded with descriptive imagery and flowery adjectives; it tends to be slightly confusing and heavy-handed. And yet… despite pulling clunky metaphors and laborious turns of phrase (that are more awkward than poetic), despite being written by a fledgeling nineteen-year-old author trying to write in a writerly, literary style, The Gunslinger is still pretty damn good." - Thea, The Book Smugglers.
As For Me (2019): A great and murky beginning to the series (micro) and a unique and cock-eyed contribution to the genre/ repertoire-itself/ King's canon (macro).
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(1) I haven't been this excited about a blog post in I-couldn't-tell-ya-when!
ReplyDelete(2) "But is that a dealbreaker for a fantasy epic? You're supposed to want to keep reading to figure out what the heck is going on." -- I think part of what makes this approach work for me is that it feels organic. If you drop a reader into a fantastical setting and then take too much effort to explain the whys and wherefores of that setting, I think you run the risk of causing it all to seem like it's a fake. Whereas dropping readers (or viewers, if you're talking movies or television) into the middle of it with a minimal amount of description kind of forces the audience to pay attention. Or else tap out, I guess. But a well-considered work of the fantastic will hear people threaten to tap out, look at them, blink once, and continue on about its business undaunted.
to me, that's what "The Gunslinger" does. But I acknowledge that it doesn't work for/on everyone.
(3) "And in a few spots, the mix of recognizable fantasy trope with 70s dystopian fatalism / mystic drugginess does not succeed." -- The rational and objective side of my brain reluctantly has to agree with this. If memory serves, this is even more true of the original version than it is of the revised version.
(4) "When I make a list of each scene of the book that stands out to me - the opening palaver with Brown, the re-telling of the massacre of Tull and all that preceded it (including the rather bizarre gun-barrel-abortion), meeting Jake, taking mescaline and having one off with the ring-circle demon, magical jawbones, the journey by handcar under the mountains while attacked by that staple of all post-apocalyptic fiction, slow mutants - there isn't one I'd point to that as unenjoyable." -- A lot happens in this novel. I remember seeing comments from people during the development of the movie where they said the first novel couldn't/shouldn't be adapted because nothing happens. Huh?!? That sucker is jam-packed!
(5) "But this is the very quality of The Gunslinger that appeals to me: it's like an actual glimpse through the Ur-Kindle into the King of a different timeline." -- That's part of the appeal for me, as well. You can also look at it as though much of the novel (occasional lapses in voice excepted) is kind of like a transmission from Roland's psyche. The weirdness and formality of it isn't unlike what it might be like to read Roland's mind.
Alternatively, that may be a bullshit justification on my part!
(2) Oh yeah, very much so. A poorly handled info dump or sloppy mix of worldbuilding can turn me off a fantasy epic quicker than anything. I think King walks a mostly successful line here in bk 1.
Delete(4) That kept jumping out at me this re-read. Had they done a more or less shot for shot adaptation of bk 1 for the movie, it might not have been a huge box office hit, but it'd probably have been the type of cult classic/ slow-burn-sleeper-hit that people would talk about for decades to come. Why? because it's jam packed with memorable (and very cinematic) scenes. It has the atmosphere of a weird 70s movie. So yeah: it's odd to hear this from so many people, as it's like people saying the problem with Superman: The Movie is that no superheroes appear. I mean, what? You might not like the events, or their presentation, but to say nothing happens in bk 1 is demonstrably false.
(5) "The weirdness and formality of it isn't unlike what it might be like to read Roland's mind. " Yes, sir - when that happens, it's a success. And I'd say this is handled quite well in the rest of the series. In bk 1, there are just a few spots where it seems like the reader wants to correct King's presentation of Roland's mind, like "No, no, this isn't Roland." Which is weird but also totally natural.
(4) I remain convinced that the way to go on that movie was to do a low-budget but faithful adaptation, rely on quality and marketing to turn it into a hit, and then blow the world up with the sequels. Too bad I'm not a powerful producer!
Delete"Too bad I'm not a powerful producer!"
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(6) "What? This happens off-camera? It's a dodge and intentional frustration; I do not approve of such things." -- I don't mind that too much; the next chapter picks up with Roland saying none of it really mattered all that much to him, anyways. So in a way, you've gotten precisely what you need to get about him: that at this point, his mania for the Tower is basically all there is to him. (Which makes the movie, in which Roland isn't even interested in the Tower, all the more baffling.)
ReplyDeleteBut I can see it your way, too. It really is kind of a cheat to cut away like that.
(7) "Moreover, it is never revealed why the Crimson King whom the MIB serves wants them to palaver to begin with, or why he'd go through the trouble of setting it up, or why the MIB would do many of the other things he does leading up to it if the whole point was to set up a meeting. Not here in book 1, but I don't think anywhere else either." -- If it is, I don't remember it either. I like all the novels, but the Crimson King, sadly, is not my among my favorite elements.
(8) "Is it just me or was like 80-90% of the recognizable Dark Tower content added in 2003. Is this a cheat? I don't think so, but there is a world of difference between mysterious scene-setting to be solved later and going back and, well, digitally inserting references." -- It's not just you, nope. For my part, I don't think it's a cheat ... but I *feel* it's a cheat, if you know what I mean. The additions of a lot of the things that were added into the revised version make all the sense in the world, and I take no exception with King doing it. But they stand out to me, and because of that they don't feel real. They feel like shit some guy made up.
(9) "Two films he doesn't mention are Alejandro Jodorowsky's El Topo and Holy Mountain." -- I saw a bit of "El Topo" once and could not get behind it at all. But I suspect this is more my fault than the movie's, so I need to give Jodorowsky another chance one of these days. It's probably going to be via that documentary about his would-be Dune movie.
(10) "Which is to say, when one wants to read the "soul" of that generation, The Gunslinger might not be the most obvious place to look, but perhaps it's equally revealing." -- This is very true, and given the novel's origins during King late-sixties college years, it makes all the sense in the world.
(6) It's not quite as bad as the scene in JERSEY GIRL where Ben Affleck delivers the big inspirational speech to save the day (or whatever it was) and it goes to voiceover about how it was such a great speech. That stands out to me as the ultimate example of this sort of thing. But, still, this one here at the end of bk1 bothers me. I can just see it cutting to commercial/ fading to black and then coming back in and Roland saying "And that's why I never wore a lifejacket again" or something. It's missing. I ding the book here for this.
Delete(7) I ding the series for King's failure(s) to develop the CK in a satisfying, well-rounded, sensible way. I'll be casting a rather critical eye on this as I go along, I think; it's really stuck in my craw since reading it the first time in 2013.
(9) Not a fan either, really - that window of psychedelic 70s craziness had closed somewhat by the time I got around to them (thankfully ZARDOZ was seen while it was still wide open!). But definitely some thematic overlap between what he was doing in those 2 films and what King is doing in bk1 .
(6) I'm okay with it, but I think King would have been well-advised to find a different approach. My guess is it alienates more people than not.
Delete(7) One of the King podcasts I listen to made the argument that the Crimson King is kind of a typical example of King's feelings about evil: that it is largely pathetic and ridiculous, and that those who work toward doing evil deeds often collapse like strawmen when pushed against a bit. I think that probably IS King's stance, and there are plenty of other examples of King big-bads who crumple like paper.
It doesn't work for me. For one thing, I don't really believe that's the truth. I think evil is only toothless if its teeth are ripped out of its head, and apparently that's a thing you have to do more or less regularly. Who knew? But aside from that, it's not necessarily satisfying storytelling. It doesn't kill the series for me; but it probably puts the whole thing at an A for me rather than an A+.
I've heard and read that theory many times, and like you, I think it's kind of misguided. That could be King's take on evil - fair enough, makes sense - but it's completely unsatisfying for a writer of fiction to have such an attitude about ALL "evil" characters. It's like excusing yourself to not develop or think about things.
DeleteWith King's massive success, the conversation always seems to default to "Well, I guess it worked for King okay so who cares." Another attitude that doesn't quite work for me. Or, rather, like King's perceived attitude towards "evil people," it might very well be true, but it's just not a persuasive argument for me. Not developing a character because "hey evil people aren't so developed" is just kind of... dumb. I don't know how else to put it.
There was supposed to be another sentence at the end of my last comment. "Not developing a character is dumb, and excusing its dumbness due to King's massive popularity - which guarantees whatever he writes will be a bestseller, regardless of content or approach or philosophy re: evil characters so it behooves all King fans to put that aside when evaluating anything in his work - is dumb, too.
Delete(11) "the MIB mentions to Roland that before he gets to the Tower (and the king that lies before it) he must face the Ageless Stranger. Who is this?" -- I believe he is best identified of Mr. Dangling Plot Thread of Bangor, Maine. In other words, I think King simply went in a different direction.
ReplyDeleteI suppose you *could* make the argument that he's referring to Flagg. And if you wanted to be cute, you could make the argument that Roland himself is the Ageless Stranger, and that he's being told here he is going to have to face himself one of these days.
Actually, I kind of like that interpretation...
(12) "What do people think of the subtitles of the different books? This one is "Resumption." Is that too on the nose?" -- I'm not a fan of the subtitles, personally. And I think "Resumption" is WAY too on the nose. But neither aspect is a deal-breaker for me.
(13) Looking forward to your thoughts on "The Drawing of the Three." That one's a corker!
(11) Gaaa, I suspected as much! I hate that crap. Why go back and add 5000 references to Dark Tower stuff in later books but leave this one alone?
Delete(12) Glad to hear this. I think it's kinda nuts, myself. Like you say not a dealbreaker just a big puzzler for me.
(13) Spoiler alert: it really is! I hope to finish it soon, I'm tearing through it because it's just such a page-turner.
(11) Maybe there's a reason and neither of us remembers it. It does seem like a big thing to simply miss in the revision; so big that I kind of have a hard time imagining that being the case. But I recall there being some incredibly obvious anachronisms that he failed to prune out of the revised edition of "The Stand," too, so maybe he did just blink and flip past it.
Delete(12) It's also weirdly formal and bit pretentious, neither of which ("The Gunslinger" notwithstanding) are exactly hallmarks of King's work. So it's a little incongruous for that reason.
(13) Both that and "The Waste Lands" are so incredibly good. If you told me those were King's two best novels, I'd have no argument against it.
(11) I'll be keeping a lookout! I'm kind of concerned these things don't add up, but I hope to discover I only missed them. As it is, I'll be looking for the Ageless Stranger, some compelling reason for the CK to have set up this end of bk 1 palaver between Roland and the MIB, and some answers to my questions re: the doors.
DeleteI suppose you could look at the idea that "all things serve the Beam" in a semi-literal sense that isn't all that dissimilar to the idea that the Devil is always actually doing the Lord's work ... it's just that the Devil's methods are really weird and unsavory.
DeleteSo maybe the idea is that in his roundabout sort of manner, the Crimson King is actually trying to help Roland in his goals. A weird idea, but it's possible King had something like that in mind.
In which case, I call a bit of bullshit on it.
(9) The more I think about it, the more logical it seems that King and Jodo are in fact drawing from the same, or similar, wells for their ideas.
DeleteThe question is whether this type of story really suits King's strengths as a storyteller.
As for the 60s mysticism, I tend to be indulgent to that sort of stuff. It just has this sort of weird, cool vibe to me. However, that's just me, really.
ChrisC
I think you hit on it. Does the GUNSLINGER style suit King's strengths as a storyteller? Not as easily as the other books in the series, I'd say. And yet... there's just something unique and wonderful about Bk1. Particularly as I say because it sounds like some alternate universe version of King. I wouldn't want everything to be like this, but I'm glad bk1 starts in this disorienting fashion.
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